May
7
Basketball Time
Sweat dripping from Grady’s head as he was rushing down the court with the basketball. Thirty seconds left in the second quarter, Grady passes the ball to his teammate. Time is flying bye and we are already in the last quarter and we are tie score in points and we have the ball, forty seconds left and we have the ball, who will win…
Grady, I’m so impressed with the way you tried to include so many aspects of descriptive writing. Just remember to read again to check for any corrections.
thank you
Great it got me all competitive because if it were me I would shove my way to win. :]
good job